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I just want to hold you tightly
and never let you go
To always make you smile
and never had a tear

I want to love you
more then words could ever show
cause my love it is true
I want to spend the rest of my life with you

There is no other in my life
nobody that will truly know how I feel
but you have proved to me
that there is more then hatred in this life

You're my life
and the one that i want to be with
cause baby it is true
You are forever the one I don't want to be without
a crappy poem.....
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TristenCoy Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Student General Artist
This is awesome! Very cute poem (: And relatable :aww:
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MyLoveForYouEternity Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :)
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TristenCoy Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Student General Artist
You're welcome (:
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TheImpossibleWriter Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aww not true
Its a beautiful poem
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MyLoveForYouEternity Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you <3
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xxAkatsukiGirl85xx Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
a wonderful text i love it :)
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MyLoveForYouEternity Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much :)
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xxAkatsukiGirl85xx Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
here you go :3 :hug:
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MyLoveForYouEternity Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug:
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xxAkatsukiGirl85xx Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
:hug: you are very dear :3
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RabeaUmbra Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
D'aw, loved it n.n Its so sweet and simple, yet elegent in my humble opinion
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MyLoveForYouEternity Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hehe :blush: thank you <3
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KuraiTenshiV Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist
Bah is not crappy, i like it gives me hope
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MyLoveForYouEternity Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hehe thank you. I think it needs to be reworded or something. Eh oh well, im sure when the time is right i will make it even better haha
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KuraiTenshiV Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist
i like it i think its got all the right words, but then i know how if you keep looking at it you can always find problems as the creator
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MyLoveForYouEternity Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha that tends to happen to be quite a bit, i have like severe ocd >.> sooo i know if its not right and i need to make it perfect...but then i cant lol. so i just keep it as a rough draft and then when the time is right, i go back to it and try to make it even better
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KuraiTenshiV Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist
Yea I get that with my drawing, but 9 out of 10 I make it worse lol
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MyLoveForYouEternity Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol it sometimes happens to me as well lol....and then im like damn i should of left it...
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KuraiTenshiV Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist
everytime
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