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Sometimes I think of you
of how I wish to be with you always
To hold you tightly
deep within my arms

Sometimes I cry
wishing that you were here
to love you always
and never be apart

But sometimes it isn't right
to be in love that it hurts deeply
To have to be fully apart
and never show the love there is

Sometimes I wish you cared enough
to understand how I truly feel
To always be with you
throughout my entire life

But even though I think of this
I know deep down, we weren't meant to be
I wish you truly understood me
and maybe it was best we never met

Cause deep down it hurts too much
to love someone, but another
I wish that we were never together
than maybe this pain would never be here...
a poem of someone. Probably not someone you're thinking of. But its someone that was close to me
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ReizYouUp Featured By Owner May 6, 2013
Very nice. If u ever wanna talk, I'm here.
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MyLoveForYouEternity Featured By Owner May 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you
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ReizYouUp Featured By Owner May 7, 2013
Thanks for posting.
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JMFireFly325 Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Great flow...great writing...I can really relate to this one right now!
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MyLoveForYouEternity Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :hug:
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JMFireFly325 Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
welcome hun :hug:
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KittySib Featured By Owner May 3, 2013
I love the wistful, sorrowful tone of this piece. I bet a lot of people feel this way about someone at least once in their life...
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MyLoveForYouEternity Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, and I believe so too
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KittySib Featured By Owner May 3, 2013
:D
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