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When I was 14 years old,
it was the day I thought of suicide.
Slicing my legs and my arms,
wanting this pain to end.
My heart was always broken,
the moment you laid your hands on me.
I wish I just given up in life,
but I kept pushing through.
When I was young,
I thought i was a foolish girl.
Thinking there was love in life,
just to find heartaches and pain.
My smile was always fake,
maybe once in awhile I wouldn't show it.
But the day I felt pain,
I lost my smile for good.
I felt like dying numerous of times,
but never ended it fully.
Once in awhile I felt free,
but my heart ripped to pieces.
Maybe when my life is gone,
I will be noticed in the afterlife.
But until that day comes,
I will always be invisible to this world.
it was the day I thought of suicide.
Slicing my legs and my arms,
wanting this pain to end.
My heart was always broken,
the moment you laid your hands on me.
I wish I just given up in life,
but I kept pushing through.
When I was young,
I thought i was a foolish girl.
Thinking there was love in life,
just to find heartaches and pain.
My smile was always fake,
maybe once in awhile I wouldn't show it.
But the day I felt pain,
I lost my smile for good.
I felt like dying numerous of times,
but never ended it fully.
Once in awhile I felt free,
but my heart ripped to pieces.
Maybe when my life is gone,
I will be noticed in the afterlife.
But until that day comes,
I will always be invisible to this world.
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Invisible Girl
she's the girl who doesn't talk,
too hurt to say a thing.
she's the girl who misses you,
seeing you makes her heart pang.
she's the girl who hardly cries,
she wants to come off tough.
she's the girl who fakes a smile,
you'd never know her life was rough.
she's the girl who you put last,
but say you love her most.
she's the girl who'd cry & cry,
if you became a ghost.
she's the girl who messes up,
she can't do anything right.
she's the girl who gives up first,
no, she won't win the fight.
she's the girl who'd give everything up,
just to be with you.
she's the girl who needs you most,
the girl you look right through.
Literature
It hurt
It hurt you know,
Falling for you.
I felt very bump and bang,
Every bruise and break.
I tried to hold on,
I tried to slow down,
I tried to stop.
But it was inevitable.
Gravity was too much,
It kept pulling me down
To you.
And when I landed,
When I hit the ground
At your feet
I could barely breathe.
It was too much
For anyone to handle
Let alone me.
But I watched you reach down,
And felt you pick me up.
You gathered together
All my broken pieces
And worked for days
Making me whole again.
It took time
But I finally realised
That for me to fall down to you
Meant that you
Had fallen too.
So once I was rebuilt
I searched for your missing p
Literature
Depressed Girl
I'm tired of live in a world full of cruel, selfish and hypocritical people
I do not want to live in a world like that, I can no more
Was stupid of my part believe that one day would find my place in society and in the world
But they reject me and treat me very cruelly, that made me a person who all his life will bring a great emptiness and pain in his heart
I opened and gave them my heart into small pieces, until they left me with nothing
I put aside my problems and needs, to put theirs first
I put aside my happiness, to put theirs first
And the only thing I received was incomprehension, scorn, rejection, ignorance and the most painful lone
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