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I need to feel your touch
I need to love you
I need to hear your heart beat
and to always hear your voice

You lighten up my world
You bring happiness within my life
I need to be with you
to always have smiles on my face

I need you here
I need you there
I need you with all my heart
cause without you I am nothing

I need you to want me
I need you to love me
Cause I will always love you
deep within me

I always want to show you
I always want to be here for you
I need you to be with me
cause without you, I am nothing

So love me forever
love me always
For with you in my life
There will always be love

I need to feel your touch
To hear your voice
I need to always be with you
Cause my love, you complete my world
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Critique by 99colourful Mar 22, 2013, 5:20:09 PM
This is very lovely. Just by reading this, it reminds me of how I feel exactly towards someone I love. Their friendly presence and smile always greets me in the late morning, early noon. I view this very beautifully instead of sad. Though I am not in a lovely dating relationship with them, just by seeing them, I feel happy. (I hope it doesn't seem odd to read this while listening to this: [link] ) Anyways, I hope to see more lovely poems along the way! This is really good, and it really speaks to me. I can see others will as well
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner May 30, 2013
I felt this once. Then I realized I was just wasting my time, energy and words. It sucks to be ignored by someone you love...
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MyLoveForYouEternity Featured By Owner May 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yea i understand
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner May 30, 2013
But at least you found love... I didn't...
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MyLoveForYouEternity Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Eventually I did. It takes awhile
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner May 31, 2013
Not too long, I hope.
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KuraiTenshiV Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Hobbyist
i like it its very good, makes me sad though becasue ive felt this way only to have it tossed back at me.
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner May 30, 2013
Welcome to hell!
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KuraiTenshiV Featured By Owner May 30, 2013  Hobbyist
O.o
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MyLoveForYouEternity Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :hug: and awww
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KuraiTenshiV Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Hobbyist
you are most welcome, and is ok i survive
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