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Every night I dream of you
wishing upon a star
that you were here for real

Every night I lay in bed
a dream so wonderful
cause you are in it

I dream of being with you
to grow old together
a day never apart
only you are in my thoughts

A feeling so wonderful
it is in my heart
the love that grows
stronger each day

Every night I think of you
our love is for real
you are always here

I dream of happiness
being with you all the time
a dream so magical
that everything seem so real

Every night
you are here with me
keeping me safe
throughout the night

After all it is just a dream
but I promise you
that one day it will be real

So for now I will just dream
of seeing you in sight
cause some day it will happen
that you will be in my arms
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Pauper-Circumstance Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013
So beautiful. :)

I tend to dream about the same girl every night. Only thing is, I'm almost certain she never dreams of me. :P You do capture the emotions perfectly though. :clap:
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MyLoveForYouEternity Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much :) and you never know she could be dreaming of you as well.
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Pauper-Circumstance Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013
:shrug: Ahh, who knows. My guess would probably be "no". If she doesn't think me consciously then why would she think of me unconsciously?

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MyLoveForYouEternity Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Not too sure
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MockingJay1256 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is exactly how I feel right now! Most beautiful poem of the day!! And I read a lot so its a big compliment!! Love it :heart: don't stop the amazing-ness! :D
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MyLoveForYouEternity Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much :)
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MockingJay1256 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome! It is truly a very beautiful poem :)
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Skat3rX Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013
Who is it for?
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MyLoveForYouEternity Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The love of my life
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Skat3rX Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013
I can really relate. And I hope u 2 will hold each other the way I wish I could hold my girlfriend.
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MyLoveForYouEternity Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I wish i could hold mine as well. I dream too. But one day it will happen <3
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Skat3rX Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013
It will we just got to hang on.
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LordKontaes Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Very lovly poem, keep up the good work.
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MyLoveForYouEternity Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much dear :)
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phoebewyndham Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I commend you on this. I always struggle with free verse when writing, because Im always trying to mold my poetry into a pattern. Even if I don't have a pattern in mind when I start writing it just always ends up that way. Nicely done. I love the themes as another commenter said, of wakefulness and dreaming. That the person realizes it is a dream. Its nice.
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MyLoveForYouEternity Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much :)
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Sinnomangirl Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is sweet. I like the transition for being awake and dreaming.
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MyLoveForYouEternity Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :)
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MyLoveForYouEternity Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hehe
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